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richardf8 ([personal profile] richardf8) wrote2004-06-03 10:57 pm
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A Haiku for George Tenet

A blood soaked poultice
Bound upon his forehead,
George Tenet takes his leave.
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[identity profile] deckardcanine.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
That's only a Haiku if you move "George" up to the previous line.
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[personal profile] richardf8 2004-06-05 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, the middle line is short a syllable. I didn't like anything I came up with to fill it out.
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